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Old 11-25-2018, 10:34 AM   #6
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You hate us for no reason, one of us probably left your wife a lil loose
She said she wanted someone hung, all you could do was provide her with a noose
lmao dope
Im creative as fuck, your verses are dry as hell
Pull the out the blicky and have you getting a Dummy, Boy even if 69’s jail
ahh nah you completely messed this one up
Im a legend mate while you on the other hand are one of the worst
Even with the gimmick last round, you didn’t Marvel anyone with your verse
ok but loses points as a standard line
I’m a colossus, your rhetoric’s just nonsense
Not a plot twist but it’s ironic that a Woke nigga is about to leave u unconscious
aright
I’ve beaten everyone in this, you’ve got no notable victories just trashy wins
You’re a bunch of bitches obsessed with black dudes, those K’s could stand for Kardashians
lol ok


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You monkeys support this chatter? It's Jungle Book w/ pimp flair
Niggas die, they get paid. Fat apes eatin' off the weight that the chimps bear
i think I get what you were going for with the whole jungle book concept but you didn’t do it well enough to make it clear
I triiiieeedddd to tell em: you don't want these hands to rattle ya nose
We'll slide up yellin and bring the Fade to Black Live like Metallica shows
lol nice
The riots in Bmore? Basically a ride down the beach to OUR type of meet
Shit if Flacco won a ring, they'd have more dmg caused by uh-oh to his own street
nah
Fuck the sci-fi shit. You ain't got A Way Out, no save w/ the black card
So PLZ act hard. You'll be fit w/ 6 nigs in a sunken place in my backyard
hmm this is OK. Wording was a bit weird
2 choices: drawn and quartered by Fords or hung w/ ur pants saggin.
Get out of line? Boy I'll treat u like ya mom & have u pick a branch, faggot.
nah


BLM had a pretty good verse, some lines felt like they were more for a standard battle but there was only 1 clear miss imo. That opener was LOTB and gave you s good advantage. I definitely feel like you could have done more with dissing your gimmick but all in all it was a cool verse. KKK your verse was ok, you had some cool concepts but were often hurt by wording that didn’t quite get the punch across in the way it should have. I also feel you could’ve done more with dissing your gimmick. I’ve got BLM pretty comfortably here.


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