[theMuzzl3]

over-all flow, structure, and content of Jiliti's was better.

This line made me LOL, though:

"geometry with calculus mixed in algebra sets til compounds connect where an alchemists' ends "

Fool, calculus is algebra + more, mixed with geometry and trigonometry. Should have read "algebra with geometry mixed in calculus sets til compounds connect where an alchemists' ends." -- and alchemy is an ancient form of chemistry... I don't think calculus was even around back then.

That aside, and no pun intended but correct English isn't a factor here; its how the lines flow together and the content within them.

/v jilti