[Seyance]

v/jilti - way better rhymes and packed more in less space. it was pretty much over after the first 2 lines of his verse. camp, you need more complex rhymes that match up and more of them and this will give what swag you have more ethos, as better setups mean the wordplays come off better. a lot of your stuff was off a syllable or two from the rest, when you try go more than 2 lines on the same scheme it needs to be on point.

Camp take a hike, i've already scaled heights ur afraid to climb rain or shine
aint nice with wordplays & rhymes, while the first day i arrived was like make way for Christ

ain't as nice would've worked better, but this won it imo.