Was pretty dope up until the power ranger line
At which point I scrolled down & stopped reading
I like the flow of this, that bounce is smooth and enjoyable
the start and build up was smooth and kept me enthralled
Finished up and it was pretty tight
The ending was well done...can't believe you ran with it and went ooze
I almost regurgitated right there.
Old references like that are funny though.
Keep it up bruh
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