Candy- came with it, no punch lines really moved me, but still solid
had nice clever line I liked:
"sand your sandals like your win has started loosing weight
no roman nose no t for exis when i bring pain"
My vote is going to Exis
Liked his angle, nothing special really, he just compared candy to a child, then divorced his parents, then turned him into an orphan, then had him living in the basement of his step parents house, .. it flowed nicer far as punches, the story telling aspect.
candy was more relentless in punchlines, but wasn't feeling them, nor did he or she force me to feel them in the delivery of said punchlines
Last edited by Urban Dialect; 06-12-2020 at 04:24 PM.
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