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Old 07-02-2019, 05:15 PM   #4
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this was pretty awesome! flow was sooo smooth. there were many great lines and ideas that i wished were expounded on a little more.


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Stop her impervious thoughts, they’re undeservingly cropped between the hemispheres
the ending was really nice. hope to read more from you
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