View Single Post
Old 09-17-2015, 06:51 AM   #189
oats
Steel Cut
 
oats's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2013
Posts: 5,072
Battle Record: 19-10

Accomplishments
- OM HOF (2x)

Champed
- Fight Night LXXXIV
- Art of Writing League

Rep Power: 79005424
oats has a brilliant futureoats has a brilliant futureoats has a brilliant futureoats has a brilliant futureoats has a brilliant futureoats has a brilliant futureoats has a brilliant futureoats has a brilliant futureoats has a brilliant futureoats has a brilliant futureoats has a brilliant future
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by sraL View Post
yeah on second thoughts the one vs black kinda relied on the picture at the end to bring it home

that may not translate so well in retrospect

maybe Pennyford Blue my pirate adventure would be a better one?
use your discretion. though, in my mind, the verses will be accompanied by some sort of visual. not sure what the legality is to rip photos from the internet and publish them in an ebook, but yeah, if you think a verse won't translate without a specific picture, might be best to use something else
__________________
You should be water
oats is offline   Reply With Quote