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Old 11-25-2018, 11:52 PM   #10
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exis i got a kick out of the breathe out our ass bit (like you when you talk) and that indigenous line was pretty ill tho. besides that, your verse wasn't truly engaging. i think this prolly took you about 10 seconds to keywrite so, maybe stay signed in and spend 10 minutes on it next time. no love like i hate the air you breathe but if you spend a fraction of an hour on it, it's gonna come out legit. if you actually try.

lenox you kept it real in this verse and didn't do any more than you had to. i'd give you a break down but you already know i already know so.. good work, nice win. keep doing you, hopefully you get a decent match next week so you can go all in.

/v lenox for the greater effort and effect.
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