Was not a fan of this battle if I can be blunt. Exx seemed unmotivated and Lenox seemed like he was mailing it in after reading exxis verse. I did LOL at "capsize/breathe out of ass" though. I don't think either of you really wanted to flesh out a concept so you just wrote a quick key and let it lay. Which can be fine, but you just need more lyracism to go with it I.E. wordplay on boat words/terms or pirate verbiage and shit. IDK, seemed ok but nothing special in all honesty
v/ Lenox
to me he had the better end product
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