Reallllllllly close to me here
Conceptually I lean Hab as Noman Man was cool...but 'sending your body parts around to different locations" just seems like mehh execution to me....leave ya body parts scattered or something more direct like that would've been better execution....also death is your destination and different locations is a lady setup multi to me
Fuck your family and the church mourning had a cool agressive tone to it...beatify as a solid wp and this is a bit more slick overall imo
Similar attempts makes this basically a coin toss....FGR gets the edge to me, props to both
EDIT: In hindsight it's be at if I , which has potential in its own right but unfortunately doesn't work as constructed here...cool attempt but just doesn't work, not even in slang
Vote Hab
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Last edited by Blue Bayou; 02-21-2020 at 09:04 AM.
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