It's not aggressive enough Body, I get the image is implied but in a 1-2 battle you gotta use all the room you have to work with. The wording is literally you'll say his outfit is inspired by shazam and that's not really a diss. That's not a big a problem as I'm making it out to be but it's my problem here. Decent bar regardless.
Inf it's somewhat similar in your case but you did more to tie everything together imo ring at his neck was cool and the setup was effective which is more important in these 2 line battles.
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Me vs you only if that’s what it takes.
Battle to the death
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like a woolah what it do to one’s medulla oblongata- revenge of Montezuma on a blotter
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