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Old 09-09-2020, 12:30 PM   #8
Adverse
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- GWL Picture Challenge
- Guerrilla Writing League
- Black August II

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Blue - Was wondering if we’d get the Blue who gave Bodey a run for her money or the one that dropped a battle verse in a topical bout against NYC. We got something in the middle here lol this verse was entertaining from start to finish, the ending bar was fucking hilarious, this is kind of like an expanded version of Sublime’s ‘Date Rape’ record. But yeah I mean what did your verse have to do with the pic? If this was the first Black August you’d have had a high chance to win this

Johnny - Not your best verse and it felt like you were a bit cramped like I told Lars (we usually had what an extra 18 lines to work with in the GWL?) But based on the short time frame you were given to churn out this quality of a verse we’ll have to watch out for you in the next round. Very cool depiction of what’s happening in the world tackled a lot of social
Issues without being too preachy and the conclusion was great. Good job sir

V/Johnny
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