Even after 5 or so reads, soulstice flow is strange. When it seems he lost me I find a way to connect the schemes after another read. Content was dope, the direction you went in was a reach imo, but thats probably more personal taste than anything. Yoda's verse was really intriguing after the first read, and it grew on me more and more with each read. Tons of metaphors to describe the downwards pace of our existance. Easy flowing and the last few lines were dope as fuck. I tried reading the other votes and attach myself more with soulstice piece, but I couldnt, it just didn't do anything for me.
V. Yoda
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