so many guns, can't decide which to pick. i'm vacillating in choice
extended or da snub? fuck.. u'll get da Long & Short Of It like i'm straight to the point
active hostility, put a hole in your dome when i blast the artillery
the headshot leaves you with a Mental Opening like you had an epiphany
Vs
Fuck ur day off! If u run lip, I’ll let the drum spit BUT my other gun clip,
…is known to act like Craig in Friday & get fired over some dumb shit
Banging on the front door!... U know me!... I don’t keep SHIT low-key!
Pull up to ur crib & start ‘dumpin on the side of the house’ like Smoke
I could grab a hammer & let bolts surge thru son like the purge begun,
I’ll put so many rounds in the air...Dr. Strange could emerge from one
This is a suicide mission. Max`ll be hollow & MORE shrapnel will follow
Or I’ll put a Lethal Weapon in his mouth & cyanide capsule get swallow
Coo verse max. Opener was hella clever as well as the epiphany bar was sick & clever as well. I almost quoted circadian rhythms but felt better if you incorporated a tie-in in reference to 'around' rather than rounds, although I see the gunplay angle you took towards. In other words, I felt the bar lacked something extra.
I personally like body verse. Idk if I like it was movie themed but the punches were wrote great for the most. Inside a 9 cap'll get swallowed/lethal weapon wp was sick imo. As well as the Friday punches. All I preference & what people can relate to here tho.
Nice battle guys but I got body here
Mvgt- Body
Gd read.
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