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Old 05-03-2020, 07:15 PM   #14
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Neighbor:

I pictured Chaps. Cowboy Boots. A Sheriff's Badge & a Hat.
Figured u'd be Ranch Dressing, but showed up lookin' like u just drank a gallon of THAT.

dope

Shit's the Last Straw. I'm some1 u've always failed to eclipse.
&that's the closest you'll ever come to a Haymaker, so either Bail or get Pitched.

dope

Don't pass that name down to ur son. Bet the boy'll be bitter.
When he finds out Dad's 45 y/o & all he managed to Destroy was his Liver.

decent line, maybe a personal attack and hits more, but its ok otherwise

Ur house's the real Pig Sty. Disgusting. That shit's never clean.
Ironic, that's easilyyy the only Stable Environment your kid's ever seen.

dope

flow was dope, and lots of good lines, attacked the pic really well

Destroyer:

u know that girl fucks loads.. I mean sure, let’s call that tat celtic...
but the hairs coming off the back of her head literally spell “dick”

seemed like a stretch, not seeing it

who u trying to fool w/that fade? bro, up it to like a four on those clippers
those three buttons are the only thing saving u from being the whitest thing in this picture

dope



verse was decent, flow seemed choppy at times with some of the words you rhymed.


vote - neighbor, his verse seemed more consistent to me and his bars seemed more creative
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