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Originally Posted by Wanderer
2 NS wins & 2 losses.. bald fatty not hyped or energised
On such an uninspiring run it resembles that 1 time u tried to exercise
this is ok to light. the you're fat so you don't like to run punches have been done a lot, so that takes a little away but this isn't bad
& Zuch lost but voters were scared. I’m calling that unfair..
Ur shocking top head robbery was the one genetics pulled off on ya hair
don't like the wording but i get what you're doing. concept is cool, execution is a slight miss to me
& ur respected? LOL I can’t bear the liars
If I ever take pointers from u it’ll be with a pair of pliers
this is cool. could have don't more with setup but still nice
Gun bar plots in ur verses but no evidence of ur plans
Still no finished article.. & newspaper’s the only time residue’s on ya hands
stretched to me as worded. ok concept
BUT I’ll prove I let the bird fly if u don’t think I’m honest
Hand extended waiting for the finger motion to rock u, pinky promise
not really a fan of this
As for Ad getting pussy.. I’ve seen ur pics so it’s doubtful bro
For u pillow talk is pleading while I hold one over ya mouth & nose
this is ok
Inspiring the youngins.. I’m a force that’s filled with adrenaline
If Ad’s influencing these kids it’s just corporate subliminal messaging
ok concept. but the angle you took hits light to me
Take advice.. ur trash so don’t doubt ur peers
Start reflecting.. cos finding ur punch is like losing something in a house of mirrors
this is cool
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Quotes: take pointers, pillow talk, house of mirrors
Close: uninspiring run, head robbery, subliminal messaging
Solid verse, there were a couple misses but I enjoyed the verse overall. A couple bars hit light to me but I liked most of your concepts.
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Originally Posted by Adverse
Wand feeble so I draw eagles n shotties he gettin merked now indefinitely
Bring turkey day to the UK show ur fam
the spread then put the bird on his centerpiece
this is kinda wordy, bruh. i want to like it but i can't get around it. maybe if you took out "show ur fam the spread"
It’s been a tough couple battles, this time dude’s getting trashed by me
And way Zuch made you his bitch bet you’ll do reviews for the mag this week
this is ok
My bars are masterpieces, should be framed and fetch an amazin price
Closest you are to art is cuz you look like one them stick figures came to life
so many stick figure bars this week. this is kinda funny, but don't like the setup
Ironic he got that bird physique and is an actual featherweight, right??
You’re literally Dave Lite, got a quarter of his skill n ur half his dang size
don't really like this
For this queer got ratchets, or maybe I’ll make you fear the hatchet
And watch the ‘axe take Wanda part’ like it’s tryna appear on black-ish
this is ok
Supposed to believe you a convicted killer sprayin k’s...bro ain’t no way
Only time ‘Wand gettin charged’ is when he feelin frisky tryna get into some anal play
light to me. not a huge fan of homoerotic bars
Know you get a lot of Harry Potter references...the 9 give him more of that
Once I put that cap on his head it’ll tell me he’s bitch how’s that for a Sorting Hat?!
cool concept.
Summer classic was tragic, squeezed past me in last NBL...this time I’m aimin for the fences
Third time’s the charm, cus the trey’ll leave you hangin like a pendent
this is ok
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Quotes: Zuch's bitch, sorting hat, third time's the charm
Close: centerpiece, Wanda, getting charged
Also came with a good verse this week, with some nice bars mixed in with misses. there wasn't anything that was really bad per se, but also nothing blew me away.
Vote: Wanderer I have this even on quotes so tie breaker for me is who had the more creative punches. Between "take pointers"/"house of mirrors" and "sorting hat" Wand's stood out to me a little more. Very close battle, one of the best ones this week so props to both of you.