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Old 04-08-2019, 06:31 AM   #8
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This was pretty dope @Witty

Really solid structure, I thought the rhyme started to get stale around the 'sun can shine' point, but then you really saved it. Good little exercise, would love to see more
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Originally Posted by PancakeBrah View Post
I'm going to start off on a tangent.

when I write, lately, I feel as if I begin by stringing together ambient ideas and concepts, then i realize I'm just typing the words coffee, tawdry, and autumn over and over and over, again, then I pass out dru-
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