[NYCSPITZ]

I enjoyed this. You are a good lyricist with an endearing, playful discussion forum/feedback persona which causes many people to overrate you. You are hilarious sometimes, but lots of your prose is long-winded, rushed, and jaw-droppingly incoherent. A unique voice but often the tenuous connections you use to bridge topics are absurd and you are prone to meaningless ostentation. You have definitely elevated though and I like what I see. Don't take this wrong baby I'm a libra so I gotta balance the coke on my fish scales, beat dead man and you can find me in the semis...