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Old 01-13-2021, 01:47 PM   #14
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Originally Posted by Mac View Post
you'd never be a father like Zuch, he goes way beyond
his crib got 3 ingredients curry, your toilet is uterus pond
light. a little too straight forward.
sorry for your failed career that shit must hurt
wanting to be Forever 21 and at 60 still folding shirts
ok concept. punch could have been worded tighter but this cool
old age doesn't come alone, u got one foot in heaven
bitch your hairline got more patches than Cyberpunk 2077
best bar of your verse
so you endin up bloody, disfigured and thrown in a box
a rope across ur throat like big toe stickin out of torn socks
don't like this
Quote: Cyberpunk 2077
Close: Forever 21

A couple misses but this wasn't bad. Nice work Mac.

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Originally Posted by Destroyer View Post
u got lots of trigger talk, but i know i won’t spy chrome
all them gun bars like capitol rioters...they stay in the “no fly zone”
concept is cool. but this is a weird angle. bullets would make more sense than guns to "not fly"
but des is coming for u. i settle the score and make hits
soon as i find mac address i will be leaving him in 48 bits
i fuck with this
dude stay surrounded by dick, soon as he see one, he pulls it
before u know it the mac will spit...and i’m not talking about bullets
this is ok. wording to say he swallows would hit harder, but still ok
it’s over for u youngin. u way too green to bring the ruin
plus we all know des is known for losing babies, not for losing to em
light. ok closer
Quotes: Mac address, mac will spit
Close: no fly zone, closer

You did your thing. Cool verse.

Vote: Destroyer straightforward win on quotes. props to both, this was one of the better Mac verses i can remember reading.
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