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Old 10-08-2017, 10:06 AM   #12
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Ullr comedic twist ending to what seemed a serious piece gives him a clear win here. Random but funny. Hate to nit pick but there was a bit of mis-matching syllables without sounding like a dick but overall imagery was dope n the verse did what it set out to do, very good execution. Tighten that pen ullr, good verse Bro!
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