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Old 02-18-2019, 11:11 PM   #6
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I gone through these verses and it is a shame that the subject matter differed, for the simply fact that I don't believe it gives a fair share to the matter at hand. Broken's verse is based on an abstraction while MMLP's verse is based on an interpretation. Broken had made many strong points as well as brought hard hitting lines with fully automatic flows venture off in short segments. MMLP's verse on the other hand drew me in anticipating the next line to figure out where it was going and constantly questioning what exactly was going on??? In regards to engaging one into a topic MMLP had an edge and twisted it, Broken's verse had the battle oriented domineering angle which presented his lyrical prowess but the subject abstraction can be interpreted in many ways. I believe to give and fully fair assessment the subject should be the same. With that being said, I will give the edge to MMLP for pulling me in and peaking more my interest.
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