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Originally Posted by Cred
@ evaD
Who's this lame? head shot wen the toolie flame
Ruger bang. I'll push Daves shit backwards quicker than his username
Catch u in traffic n u goin to da grave wit ya bitch. AK wit da grip
Grand Theft Auto: Vice City.. this nigga gettin sprayed IN the whip
Pull up n blam first. Dracos in hand wen my mans lurk
as soon as he Drops they'll be talkin bout the Pops like last weeks bags verse
Let off a .22 in his gut jus for dog even thinkin he cud go against me
dis Shit 'll rip the whole lining out ur stomach quicker than Rawn MD
Fuck this foreign faggot s'no way u cud be my enemy bitch
U'll end up a dead man over that beef, Dave.. on some Wendy's shit |
I usually do a full breakdown but my feed for every bar is pretty much the same for you here: delivery is slick as hell and makes for a really enjoyable read BUT the concepts themselves were all pretty basic and/or old with the exception of the Rawn line which was cool. Actually the Bags one was OK too bc of the current event flip even though the pops wp is old. There's obvious talent here but mostly the concepts were lacking for me this week.
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Originally Posted by evaD
Born ready, You know my hands on the holster
Cred Take two steps and get clapped to the side of the head like he was dancing the salsa
Haha, nice. Rhyme works for me in my accent but you shoulda known better - I imagine it'll lose impact for north American voters.
& If He admits his wife is a hoe you’ better believe him
Her entire scheme is the wire theme - different dudes going way down in the hole for every season
I never watched it so I had to google. For anyone else: the song on the opening credits of the show The Wire is called "Way down in the hole" and is sung by different dudes in season 1 of the show vs season 2 vs season 3 etc. Objectively this is quite good but I'm kind of annoyed by how long it took me to understand all the layers of the wp.
Bitch can’t keep it to herself that’s why she walk like she got that ‘rupaul tuck’
Soon as she slide that back up a bunch of dudes start unloading like it’s uhaul truck
I like the idea but not 100% clear on what's meant by 'slide that back up'. I get it in the sense of sliding the back of a uhaul truck up but not sure what the other side of the wp is supposed to mean in reference to his girl.
I can get u benzos or perc, but homie I ain’t tryna grand stand
Creds only experience with big pharma was that affair he had with John boy the ranch hand
flip is kinda funny ... not bad
& Dave is nice w/ the hands but really I like the uzi better
All it take is one burst to twist up the fabric of his chest like it’s a corgi sweater
Meh.
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Dave got it. More creative and humorous.