I enjoyed reading everyone's verses, some really dope writers graced us with some cool, fresh material. My vote goes to @
Unemployed. His story wasn't complex and as detailed as some of the other participants, but the simplicity of his story (a woman who is dealing with a cheating partner) and the flow was pretty smooth and connected, and I really liked how he ended with the same two lines from the beginning, flipped. That was clever.
Big ups to everyone though.