[Mr. J]

Short verse is kind of hard to work with due to it's....well shortness
and the impact of the verse has to be felt, which I do find interesting
especially since short verse is my favorite....carrying on...

Soulstice, your verse had a certain expertise to it, it seemed well planned
the route you took your verse from the beginning was intriguing, I'm sad it's so short
but the way you focused your verse on how technically abstract your verse can be
your use of vocab really brought a refreshing read as I finished it, I enjoyed it a lot
you held your own and there's no denial in that to make it this far..

Darth, I always enjoy reading your work when you have the time to drop
and seeing as how your verse has taken a very, very, short straight to point route
it really shows how much you can compact into a verse with very few words
I enjoyed the way you flowed through this verse and it makes me want to enjoy your OM's
either way you have put a very different twist on your style it seems and it shines
you stick to your topic as well as Soulstice did, and it shows...

V......My vote is a tough choice after reading these a few times,
but both writers make the reads seem so...enjoyable, it feels like I read a whole chapter in few words
you both have brought such strong verses, and being here puts you at a different level
for you both to do so well with so little makes it hard to choose to be honest
I guess I have to go based off of who seemed more memorable to me...
I'm going to have this one to Darth...I just feel he had made a deeper impact on me verse-wise
amazing battle fella's nice work...