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Old 10-12-2015, 02:06 AM   #8
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This intro was pretty dope then you pick up and run with it at the end
I love the way you choose to word some of your ideas it makes it a fun read
been wondering where youve been lately and saw this most recently
been meaning to get to it but been busy otherwise dope shit man..that opening is smooth...
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