no i like this kind of weird. cool bars. i like the shock value phrases:
your gods dead resurrected on your kitchen table
with my cock wet
wheres your daughter at i wanna scare her
lmao.
among others..
if i were to nitpick i'd tell you i do not like the "of the worse" phrase (or "duplication of the worse").. doesn't make sense to me.. same with "whats worst".. i don't see the context of that phrase within the line
i'm intrigued how you dropped "hopelessness" to the third line, i kinda "read it" up on the 2nd.. hesitation there?.. but it's a cool flow so either way it works
the opening line is dope
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