Adverse i liked the way you told the story and it fitted the pic perfectly, but the lines were a little overstretched which took away from it a bit. In comparison Mr J’s read smoothly with a nice rhythm to it but the content just seemed almost like train of thought randomness which didn’t really work for me. If you could combine the two verses it’d be perfect. But adverse takes it with better handling of the topic.
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