Wanderer
-Twins pressed against your shirt was pretty cool.. enjoyable meta & the setup was good
-Baptism pretty fire 'arm raised' concept and gun bar.. well developed and the short and sweet setup I dig.. nice meta
-spark from the dash and drive away / drive-by concept is niceee.. dig it, don't recall seeing it unless it's been in a live battle Ive missed
Nice short verse with cool metas
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Zelph
-Capsize is ehhhh I just feel like it's already been done a ton of ways, and better tbh... Age old vessel blood & boat reference and tie in takes away from the bar more then helps it imo cuz it's so old
-hmmm, beer belly's don't really leak out of shirts, they'd flop more than anything.. ehh, it's a decent concept at best that's a stretch to work... Not really feeling
-run the show conceptually wasn't really tied in well here and seems out of nowhere.. but the meta is fresh and pretty cool
Overall yeah Wanderer got this... All 3 of his concepts were pretty solid and his concepts were more creative and fresher on the whole... Cool read
Vote - Wanderer
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