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Old 07-26-2018, 07:50 PM   #6
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Originally Posted by Barcotic View Post
yo bags

u dont bother me, guy. ur honestly whack & ur worthless
instead of making sure Bar's Staying Red..
u should probably try accomplishing that w/ ur verses
-cool little flip and uve always wanted three line punches to work, this was decent
gassed af... 20+ aliases to aid you & trigger chumps
im here to deflate ur ego, n the medicine ball that gave u a bigger one
- I guess this is a personal I don't get. Or just a workout punch? Na
went from fat to jacked? congrats but u the littlest of threats..
basically a table cloth. ill leave u flattened in the middle of a set
-it wasn't really flipped any way besides the end I felt like it could have had more.
u obv. ride ur boys in battles, dont try to put it past folks
cheap toilet paper; ur off the wall n always inside destroyer's asshole
-a bit too visual but effective lol
ur love life's looking bland, not mushy man. u lost the spark..
so call the fire department, ur girl's pussy cant get off of barc
-cat out the tree lol but not really, decent
ur facing defeat. best believe it bro, its known
got so much heat on this knob, i can reenact a scene in home alone
-na idk what the nob was referring to
bring ur nc cliq, bitch. the chrome's starving
im an anteater. the long nose will lift ur whole army
- clique punches kinda running dry at this point
not prepared? idc. get scared & then abort, ock..
or ur next deadlift is gonna require 6 pallbearers n a short walk
-i like this. I just feel like are more personals besides workout/clique for bags. He has so many different personals
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Originally Posted by Ghost1 View Post
ur a literal retard. so imma have choppas get to shreddin u dude
burnas smokin crazy...sig after sig after sig...like ya moms when she was pregnant w u
-ok opener
dude why? ya mom smoked pcp n everyday she wish that ud die
funny u writin fallopian flips an that bitch wish she had her fuckin tubes tied
-too basic of a flip
he posted his sister in the thot tourney like he was gettin sum cookies
no need for uterus pond....we all know damn well you aint swimmin in pussy
-lmao ok this one got me esp. Considering it was brought up again in chat
fr tho id treat her like ya wordplay...have her ready wen i call
ill fuck her up and force her so hard she dont even sound right or make any sense at all
-a little basic but it was harsh and effective
u got bodied in that 1-2 tryna take shots at amens child..im sayin..wow
aimin at that father son spirit got u CRUCIFIED an the holy trinity couldnt save u now
-decent try wording wasn't great
u gettin beat religiously, how dare u question me, fuckin hater
the nirvana BITCH...say sum shit...ill lay hands on this man till hes one w nature
-decent but simple
i was gonna pistol whip him...but then i hadda leave em a buck
woulda had em smashed off the handle...but this bum look like he aint eaten in months
-statementish again
send dogs at em ... dont SPEAK u clown. same story every week...but how?
u get ROASTED an cry...all we ever see is burns an waylon so now I gotta release the hounds
-i like
This was a close one imo. The neg flip was a good attempt at attacking a trend. Personals after that kind of ran dry and you tried at one on every punch. I think a fresher flip on one of his posts would have been better.

For bags, wording was the biggest thing here, some of his punches ran a little long or just needed some shuffling around yo make the concepts pop. That uterus pond shit fucking slayed me lol i think it was the biggest thing that turned the tide. On first read i was like Bags bodied. Then i read Barc again and it was closer but that bar is what tipped in imo. All the other shit was close, the one thing that stood out was that shit, not sure if it has been done before but it was nice.

Uterus, burns, no sense, sigs

Vs

Deadlift was ur best workout flip, bars staying red, toilet paper

Bags
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