Enjoyed it quite a bit as well, short and sweet. Left me wanting more tho, might be the effect you were looking for. Also like the idea of an audio of this, the way it ended I envision a back'n'forth dialogue on social commentary and reflection of self. Either way, good read, stay up.
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