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Old 01-19-2018, 04:50 PM   #5
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Originally Posted by Unfukwitable View Post
Dont open ya trap... talking like u got a Shotgun post in ya pad;
Pftt! Spawn couldn't even picture this Clown holding a SPAS!,

eh ok

Claimin his mans is outrageous til I stain his homie;
He says a lad inside, he's over covers w/ his face shocked - David Bowie,

idk what this is fr

*crackle crack* thats the sound of Bones snappin,
I'm breaking Habits...guess my only Resolution this New Years is Graphic!,

dope

Orc.. what's with this matching placement,
Can't believe I progressed thru last week & that fast I’m back to Basics...

nah

They ask me why I buck a flame & aim for huntin brains,
The Stick around... I'm committed to seeing.. *what?* Remains.

ugh too much going on in this verse idk what the issue is...these concepts are too fuckin muddled I got to stop the verse every bar to sit here and try to understand wtf is happening...not digging it

Lets tape this shit, I'll leave puncture wounds til the dweeb falls,
The video went viral but u gettin ya last views on the Tube in the ER.

this is ok

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Originally Posted by Habitat View Post
u a bitch but u gotta play with the hand that u're dealt
..ur offhand remarks always come after u get smacked in the mouth

lol simple but I fuck w this lol

u're a southern crack baby, s'why ur a deadbeat people pity
u'd pay the bills cause it's the name of every dealer in the city

eh corny

i'd almosttt feel bad killing you slow, cuz the fact is ur delicate
the chromite end ur physical existence.. either way you'll be back in your element

fuck w this

ya stacks don't add up to habs, for u the comparison's dire
fuk could say he makes a dollar perfidy of mine n I'd bet the difference he's a liar

idk the word perfidy

always losing to bottom tier faggots n u just can't get quoted
u couldn't drop heat in a versifier engulfed the hand that wrote it

idk the word versifier

ur mack game is weak, i'll stab this lame geek for moral purposes
then give ur bitch a colander reaction's to let me bust fluid in all her orifices

another weird word lol. a colander is a pasta strainer to my knowledge....ehh fluid in all the orifices I guess could be all the holes....this is kindve a reach ...its not awful tho

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man...I am all for creativity but sometimes u have to draw the line for clarity purposes alone. too many ideas being crammed into bars with poor execution and general disregard for the readers comprehension. usually unfuck is a lot more user friendly so im a little surprised.....I still had him landing one more than hab but this shouldn't have been so close

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