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Flo. Verse read smoothly, sort of lacked a concept and direction however with no given topic I don't feel that is worth criticizing. The biggest problem I have with this verse was, being fairly short, I feel you could have addressed the AG challenge much more thoroughly. Still a good read, enjoyed it for what it was.
Topical, feel this is a very suitable form of writing for you. You have a delicious vocabulary and put it on display. You lived up to the challenge, developed the piece well for such a short write, and I was particularly fond of your use of assonance throughout. I feel you stood superior in all areas this day.
+1 Topical
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