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Originally Posted by Mac
your lines aint great. I guess rhyming aint your best trait
wan's the Art of Writing. should have been aborted at week 8
I do like this wp/punch idea but the flip doesn’t really work for me bc the AOWL is still going strong in week 16 now… I think maybe you could have reworded it to be about THIS league ending after 7 weeks and that would have worked better, especially for the voters here who don’t pay attention to the topical league anyway
when you express your love we can see a real attachment
u get a Me Too back. when she calls out for sexual harassment
Cool, set up well
don't run if u hear it cock.. i'm here to give a sweet talk
when the heat comes Wanderers the first to die in a sidewalk
Okay use of his name
verge of death. this battle is mine - you can spot all the signs
his heart beat like a club bathroom.. all u can see are flat lines
’flat lines’ like lines of coke? Sorry if I’m missing something but if that’s it then nah. “Hey man you wanna go snort some flat lines?” Nobody would ever say that
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Sharp
Wanderer's Verse
NS excuse mirror ya verses.. not a big man jettin’ around
Of course it was a last minute flight.. u always slow as fuck to get off the ground
pretty nice w the personal tie in
This is war.. I’m leading my troops cos I’m a true boss
Ur only out on the front line coz ur opener’s enough to tell us who’s lost
lol. Surprised I’ve never seen this before. It’s dope. Great wording.
Fuckin loser. Party pickups & ur service is straight to door
My designated driver’s just the golf club I’ve picked to break ur jaw
dope again
Voters’d put money on my lines so u can just fade out
I’d splurge on one of ur soft angles but ya bitch said no cum on the L shaped couch
ehh didn’t love this as much. Splurge/gambling is slightly tenuous to me, as is splurge/cum, and just the idea of ‘gambling on his soft angles’ was kind of a reach. Any one of those on their own could get a pass but all together I just wasn’t really feeling this bar.
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Didn’t like Wand’s closer but otherwise he got this from a higher highs perspective fairly comfortably. Mac had a couple of cool lines but they just didn’t hit as hard as Wand’s best bars.
V/ dark horse of the playoffs, Wanderer