^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy?
Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines
Ok opener
Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse
Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse
Decent, the execution was kinda light
Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame
Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes
This was nice, I like this
I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel
& Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals
Lol funny
Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed
& your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math
Fiya hit
The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised
Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste
Wooo, lol haymaker
I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can
Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp
Good flip I like this too
& soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus
Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus
Nice closer
Good shit Dom
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sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene
so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree
Fiya opener
wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me
if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees
Nice
real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene
Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G.
Ehh, decent at best for me
for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly
it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy
Good hit with this one
Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes
the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy
Ok at best. Kinda felt it was a light jab
stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber
i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover
This was nice
bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast! i wont even put the pump to you fam
put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man
This was badly worded I think, I got where u was going just the wording kinda made it lack. Still ok tho
he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier
so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years
Nice finish on the closeout
Good shit Blue
Yo props to both on this dope ass read here. Ok Dom started off slow with his opener , but man as the verse read through he heated nothing, but up. That wordplay off catering made that bar lotb for me. Blue verse started off with heat, but through out Blue was in & out with the consistency. He had some good hits as well with the "God to the guy" bar being my fav. Overall nothin bad to say about either good ass read, I just got Dom here for being more consistent and his verse overall hit harsher then BB.
V-Dom
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