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Old 11-21-2019, 09:26 PM   #2
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I might be high as shit but I thought this was fucking brilliant from start to finish. The opener was cool and you caught my attention with the Matrix skit and kept it fresh throughout with cool ideas and thought provoking perspectives. Flow was great throughout, would have enjoyed to hear this as a spoken word tbh. Closure stings quite well in a good way too and wraps it up perfectly. Might be my fav piece by you. This is why I still log in and read shit sometimes.
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