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Old 05-26-2020, 08:21 PM   #2
Johnny 6 feet
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Strong brag verse man. You had compounds in your compounds and a flow that never fell off despite the length. Are you a Big L fan? You should check him out if not. Your use of vocab was good, sometimes you don't see that in a brag piece. Nice use of imagery in a couple of lines, which usually reserved for topicals. You got a good skill set. Nice work.

Keep on keeping on. Thanks for the reply.

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