[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Jay Welsh

You Candian fuck! Your a vet in a nooby tourny whos losin this fight
As if he climbs mountains, the bitch cant even reach the peaks of this site
Effective, could've been harsher tho
Last night he sent baron a pic of his ex, but they never had sex!
Blood rushin to his face cus she gave him the boot, thats american history x
Idk 'American History X' have been done to death
Dont test me, Im a handy man, the sort to put the locks in
An if i see U Bend its cus im about to work the 'tap in'
Decent even the bar didn't rhyme lol
I dodge bullets, you dodge real rap where the aims to hit back
I body swerve a blast to the face, your body just cant wait to serve swerve that
Funny, but the wording's a bit odd
Im breathin fire from my lungs whilst embers got him coughin..
A artist? Please, ill cloud him in smoke an he aint 'draw in' nothing
Nice
You need every gun mod goin if the blastin is happenin
I dont need help hurtin faggots, thats why the AK demodded For Battling
Cool, tho it's not really relevent to Bleak
Baron reviewed him as too nice, so no wonder i jus ate you alive
I said lets throw hands... N this faggot gave me a crisp high five
Ok closer

versus

Originally Posted by bleak

My lions trained on you. Ur clownin if ur talking your team hurts us
If they smell meat: in a compact 12 deep. turn that Audi to a 4 ring circus
Should've cleaned up the delivery, but I like this
Ur tag on my wishlist? radical Christians will hang yo faction.
Facts are as follows: Welsh conquered by acts of God like the Anglo-Saxons
Weird set-up, the punch was good tho
also know some Samoan twins, holdin weight... + the glock's heavy
Leave it to these 2 who breathing to eat food, call em Bebop &Rocksteady
Gotta clean up your wording, s'bit convoluted
Ur girl's the bi type, my bitch high &tight as she greets them 2 lips
Flo's hoe curved a certain way in the air while she catches my Sweet Chin Music
Great imagery, wording still needs polish
I'm strapped to the teeth w/rockets, bombs... blasting this geek.
Head shots=jaw so dislocated, you'd think rockets was strapped to the teeth.
Naaaaw
The screams ur hearing of NO ain't worth the fuss, kid.
I ignore your misanthropy til she won't show herself in public.
miss & throw P? naaaah lol
steel will spray. drop his body in the water, he's merk'd w/ a choppa...
In other words:
kneel &pray. then watch As a llama lake him w/o the mercy of Allah.
OK, nothing special

VOTE FLO REAL I perfer Bleak's creative concepts, but Jay's wording is waaay cleaner & harsher, that what makes the punches land effectively.