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Old 04-09-2021, 02:26 PM   #6
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Despite 3 or 4 grammatical errors I've got brokenhalo here.
His piece was packed full of imagery and tree references.

Symetrik's was Okay,and rhymed well, but didn't pack any punch. Halo's held my attention and made me want to see what came next. Symetrik's was a little too simple.
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