This was very well done. My favorite lines are:
I’m unsteady, the bloodletting is tongue stretching
The warmth of the ground is a meditative magma, in essence, fate
Are we truly men who are on the verge of being usurped of our nutrients?
because while new sequences emerge from the petri dish of our lineage
The growth of our history rarely deviates from traditional compendiums
Writer’s Block is a biological weapon set against us apes
for bible scholars, vying authors - selected strains to alter our genetic traits
Some rest under sycamores sipping Coors from society’s umbilical cord
others weave tangerine sun sonatas in the shadows; the ceilings of lore
Some cash in their schillings of war, only feeling the symptoms after
our achilles heel hooks us with wisdom only inherent in jiu-jitsu masters.
This lines have excellent schemes, and the content is riveting. The images conveyed through the whole piece are quite heart pumping, a truly electrifying read.
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