this is really good. read it a few times already. lots of creative idiom flips and wordplays that worked with the concept as a whole. specifically the pop the bottes.. Light in skin and fluid wings and flock of swallow were interesting. pluck me's sub-zero and pluck'em with paint were also cool turn of phrase.
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Lonely astronaut who doesn't know what to do with space when he gets it
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that was nasty.
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awesome.
very awesome read my man.