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Old 05-05-2019, 03:31 AM   #9
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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou View Post
Seth was having computer issues so he asked me to post


Seth's Verse

Shotty with a bigger mag. no trigger lag, i lick shots cuz crime pays
Think Zelph’s new rule; this Auto-Extension finna see you drop this Friday
nice punch hot start
Duel nina’s holstered like an outlaw. right & a southpaw when i draw the 9’s
‘Hands on the hips’ – the Drums’ll cause more Kicks to the Side than a Conga Line
well worded. i guess it's a gun bar verse ok.
I’m menacing in the streets everytime slugs rip from barrels
Menacing in the streets describes you too...when stick clique does Xmas Carols
thats awesome laughed
The circle jerkin is crazy, Body & Jab tell you you're a dude that’s worthy
But only cuz you’ve got em off so many times you could be the crews attorney
solid concept
Your girl’s obsessed with my dick, see’s yours & says ‘that’s atrocious’
she’s Blowin me up calling my Pipebomb...with you she just acts Explosive
wordplay was cool, but the wording is a bit lite
Trust i’m not biggin up ya girl when i mock you tard
When i say ya misfire i’m just laughing at how bad of a shot you are
the scheme continues, not as good as the last 1's wp but this is good
Headshots to his dreadlocks boysss I'm goin wild with chrome
Now with No Scully's lookin worse then Molder filmin X-Files alone
solid, kinda old reference but i got ya
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Originally Posted by DynamiCz View Post
U wont get far again! I bring out a Big Sword.. Im bout to scar u in
Enormous blade! Somethin huge draggin under me like Daenary Targaryen
liked the wording and solid concept, yes the wordplay is old but used in a fresh way still enjoyed this, did i mention old wp, which is not a problem if ur being ironic or trynna be funny with some shit. /long expo
U'z a culture leech! I catch u doin that weak ass Podcast... AYE cut the speech
I 'Intrude'.. Hav u leakin shit every where from the machine - thats a Data Breach
set up was funny, like that slick shit, punch was solid
Ya fam gotta cry in a hearse! Funeral cost high.. Mommy dry in the purse
U spoke on me! Silencer bring silence - It aint the first time u bout to Dy in a verse
this is kinda lite
Txt wise we diff Ranks! Im posted at the top of the thread - Think 'Original Quote'
Ya bitch outside the whip! I Layer over the Paint - She got splashed wit a 'Clear Colt'this would go over better outloud instead of being something i read. ok
Lets stop the jiving! U gone say im all gunbars - atleast u ain't false advertisin
Off Jump! It lift 2 ft n the air - Then stretch the body out like Springboard Divin
punch was ok, solid line
Ya roof be low! 3 red streaks in his dome.. U took the weapon loosely bro
Die infront of ya friends! I 'Hook the blade into his chest'.. They thought i killed Rufio
laughed at this reference and punch
Netcees get ya star bent! Round extendo n my pocket - it ain't a cigar print
Why tap his shoulder? Shotty out.. It hang from the rearview like New Car Scent
lite, simple
this was tight.. i had dynamics as a top contender coming into this battle after a great showing last week. and seth had some concepts that went over my had in week 1. but this battle seth was on point and didnt leave to much up to the reader to search. i got seth in a surprising upset here dope

v/seth
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