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Old 03-08-2019, 08:32 PM   #9
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Resin M-I-C View Post
Aiyyo
Every week it’s dicks & gay jizz.. maaann what u thrash down’s nerdy..
ur lines are a tutorial.. on what to sharpie on a face if your boy passed out early.

Ehhh not really feeling this one. Was a good idea, though. (1 Meh)

Grow up bitch.. ima kill u, ur verse & whoever u conspire with..
rhymes give off a Superbad feelin.. & the content in seth’s lunchbox inspired it.

Lol this was pretty cool. Fresh idea. (1 Good)

Plus save that asian gahbage. You need to change ya flow coward..
only impact them yellow bars have is putting ya phone battery on low power.

Bars/phone lines are super played out. This didn't hit. (2 Meh)

so shut it & do mee a favor.. he‘s not a legend so we aint seein who greater..
i’m beatin this hater.. his wordplay sounds like lloyd christmas fuckn readin the paper.

Thought this was funny, and it hit for me. (2 Good)

T, Ta, Ta-heh, It’s “THE”, Blue.. u clown..


I said AIYYYYYOOOO.

Res a streetball GOAT.. for u my accuracy’s gonna hurt like sin..
when i pick-up, i’m shootin for captain.. & it’s gonna go through his shirts & skin.

Didn't feel this one. The concept was cool, the way you worded it was meh, imo. (3 Meh)

u gettin served now, the tre beamin.. it’ll be horror, the place screamin..
the flow, u stay bleedin.. i’ll grab the fifth and wave at ur face: you daydreaming.

Thought this was pretty dope to me. Fresh concept and worded well. (1 Dope)

i slay heathens.. it’s a slight interest- ur death gives me bright images..
shotty blast, i’m getting off with Blue blood.. u can blame it on white privilege.

This was dope lol. Best bar so far. (2 Dope)

Oh u married huh. But the way u post here ur bae wont stay til the end..
cold shoulder. she built an ice wall the night’s watch would be afraid to defend.

Pretty good here. You're picking up some good momentum. (3 Good)

you both gonna spite this, aint no one care i’m leaving you lifeless..
slicin through thick and thin.. shiiiittt this knife is more loyal than ya wife is.

Pretty dope here, as well. (3 Dope)

now it’s a Pick 6, lotto boom.. big nose: give me nozzle room..
cave u in: be ina grotto soon.. machine on ur voicebox: yea that’s how my auto tune.

Not bad, but not really as strong as your last few bars. (4 Good)

the blade to ur neck.. sizzle the open wound with some salt & vinegar..
decapitate youu. then see me ‘head carrying’ like a fuckin african villager.

Fire. Liked how you tied this all in. (4 Dope)

I just WRECKED this goon.. eybody nervous, i vex the room..
surprise bitch.. last thing comin ‘out of the Blue’ is the bullet through his exit wound.

Feel like this was just alright. This seems like a nameplay that's been used on him before countless times, though. (5 Good)

Mahhhfucka.
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4 Dope
5 Good
3 Meh

Overall a very good verse. Now on to Blue.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Blue Bayou View Post
you’re a threat? plzzz..
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i’ll wet ya noodle Res. You never gave me a beast impression
i only consider you Pho cuz you’re a Tiny Asian Herb i can eat in seconds

Pretty good start to the verse here. Fresh idea. (1 Good)


so this pussy wants a fight?! then things fin to get graveee tonight
no Vital Signs - i’ll ’put a Stick to this Square tryna Pickett’ like a Labor Strike

Dope idea and dope bar overall here. Wordplay seemed like it should be played, but it's pretty fresh, to me. (1 Dope)


tore thru the SC but FLOPPED n' Cale sent you on a walk to Jesus
you didn't just run out of gas.. u hitchhiked, got ass fucked & chopped to pieces

I get what you're going for here, but this just didn't hit for me at all. (1 Meh)


i laughed when this burnout got a title shot & tried to throw connectors..
he Fell Flat ‘Denzel put'em in a Hospital Bed’ like scenes from The Bone Collector

Idk who Denzel is that you're referencing (I know Washington, not the other one) so I don't get the bar as a whole here, but I'm gonna assume it's someone off here and chalk it up as a good one. (2 Good)


kill the gun talk, we’ve seen your pics & know ur mode is neutral
yaa you’re makin the Tech Boom.. lookin like a nerd that writes code for Google

Don't know what he looks like, so I'm using my imagination here since you already put that he's Asian. Good bar overall here. (3 Good)


this isnt one of Cleft’s techno jams. this is death from the get-go fam
techs go blam when i put the ’Beams to ur Eyes & Open-Up’ like a Retinal Scan

Fire. Fresh concept and the bar hits to me. (2 Dope)


always lying about a “kill-list” of homies that u’ve clapped w/ some force..
while you ‘Make-up a Body’ i'll have the funeral director doin that to your corpse

Another dope one. Should seem a bit played out, but you worded it well enough to hit fresh. (3 Dope)


if his crew ever did cop ammo n’ we saw these ferries arm’d w/ a blicky..
we'd know the ‘Rounds are being Carried by Bitches,’ no Arianny & Brittney

Won't lie I had to Google this one. Saw it and immediately got it. Not a great bar, but still pretty good. (4 Good)


once i fuck your girl & ur cryin i'm takin’ out a front page ad
what i did between the legs’ll embarrass you.. u’d think i hitcha w/ a Nutmeg Pass

Another dope bar. Nothing really that mind-blowing conceptually but it hits well. (4 Dope)


she begs me for dick. bitch loves me cuz my wallet is fatty
tell her more bend & w/ the Hierarch she does its no wonder she’s callin me Daddy

Wordplay didn't work for me here, therefore the bar didn't hit. (2 Meh)


dead em in front of his whole class when i rush w/ blades into it..
slit his throat w/ such force it’ll leave the ‘Apple on his Desk’ like his favorite student

I've seen variants of this bar before so it isn't exactly the freshest idea, but overall it's still pretty good. (5 Good)


watch ya ass get popped! car window rollin' down when i blast the glock
‘Slide out the Side’ & put you on the ground so quick they’re callin me an Astronaut

This is another one where I get what you're going for, but the idea and the way it's worded just doesn't hit to me. (3 Meh)
4 Dope
5 Good
3 Meh

Alright so this is closer than what I thought it was at first after reading it again, but I still have Blue winning this with the slightly more consistent verse here and had the bars I preferred more. Both were pretty dope, though.

V/Blue Bayou.

Last edited by Prozac; 03-08-2019 at 08:50 PM.
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