This was well written from both ends. MMLP had a direction geared inward regarding the current situation that the world is facing at the moment which was apparent throughout. But in reading the verse nothing really grabbed me besides the vocab and the close detail to writing. But on the other end Eviction, grasped me with the psyche of the individual living in the moment captured in the frame. After the third line I was completely engaged and was anticipating each line after. This was a story of a honorific nature of a desolate world through a child's eye.
Overall I like both, but Eviction's verse was much more engaging.
Giving it up to Eviction.
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