As far back as I could remember in a flash I was struck by the splendor
daydreaming my fantasy, I began speaking them into existence to render
nice rhymes and word choice to start
my thoughts captured by the screen,
I'm mesmerized by the scenes
wishing upon stars for this dream
at night, I lie in my bed I'm envisioning how can a princess blossom into a queen
this is a jarring shift to me going from strong internal rhymes with multis to single syllable end rhymes especially as the bars are getting longer. breaks up the flow and is distracting to me as a reader. but poetically this is cool
as this child I all I wanted flashing lights, paparazzi, and the sound of fan's screams
the spark began to ring when my age was 5 when I began to sing
my family would gather around with their cameras snapping pics and videoing
my song and dance, me in my tutu and butterfly wings,
slant rhyme for videoing/wings a little weird. cool story progression
through performing I love the attention that it brings
the desire to be heard through the karaoke machine
the nagging feeling to be famous went on until I was thirteen
when a man suddenly after my school performance a woman in a dark suit and dark glasses handed me and my family a card and asked, "Would you like to be seen?"
single syllable rhyme scheme slows down the verse. story is picking up
My mother asked, "Excuse me?", the woman replied, "Let me rephrase what I mean.
Our team believes your daughter could be a star we could tell by her gleam. Her performance got and standing ovation unlike we have ever seen."
I was absolutely thrilled, "Please Mom, please Mom!" I beggingly shrilled
more story progression. rhyming feels off here.
"Why not," she said, I'm shocked in disbelief this can't be?
but this was the beginning of when my soul started to peel
I wanted fame and fortune to be part of the industry but I didn't know what it would reveal
I signed a contract not knowing what was concealed
cool. this is starting to pick up with some deeper themes
my body is now a product, a sex symbol to entertain
the toll it takes my spirit begins to drain
the devil of the industry wants to swallow my soul
I feel empty inside they're pulling my strings to control
nice. starting to bring everything back to the picture.
paparazzi track my every move and the tabloids I can't avoid
but now every part of me is in a void
I need a break I can even stand to look at my face
now they worship and praise me as their idol on a pedestal I'm placed
smooth flow. like how you flipped this
take your light off me the tears and soul burst
I need to pull back the curtain in reverse
my emotions are and self-esteem are being cursed
I can't walk down the street without dogs trying to rip my flesh when I meet
I wish I could pull back the light and shade myself from the street
escaping the fire that chars the entirety of my peace
some nice pic tie ins to close.