Hello, Dead Man.
This was a good tribute piece to your father; it was quite riveting and cool. This was a cool read; and I enjoyed it. You're quite a nice writer and poet. Honestly, you're dope; you're on your way to something here. You're dope; remind me of the underground scene; pretty cool. You're really dope.
TIPS/ Start broadening your topics; write about fantasy things; and you'll see cool results.
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