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Old 09-04-2015, 02:59 AM   #12
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you have an impeccable ability to provide almost every other word with something so descriptive, it's like i'm dancing in your head of family history and reminiscing. every line served a purpose, and like most of your pieces, came full circle by the end. it feels complete even though it still leaves you hangin, ya know what i mean? like whether or not the vicious cycle eventually stops.

but yeah, this was a great piece. nice read, as always
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Judging from those pics and the state you're in I've concluded with the fact that the world needs more Bodeys.
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