Netcees - View Single Post - Round One: Asylum vs. Reserve: NYCSPITZ (ASYLUM WINS 3-2)

Frank · 06-17-2016, 03:10 AM

Shout out to Adonis for stepping down and allowing nyc into these playoffs after Adonis put together his most innovative season thus far. Big of him.

Dope battle.

Asylum, cool verse. Mini saga. Great line about how the picture flew off the helmet and hit you in the cheek. Stand out line. Not quite clear what is actually unfolding? I'm assuming it's some sort of mob hit? Kinda like sleeping with the fishes? So what happened? You whacked him with the K bar? Good job staying current in your thinking process throughout the piece. Didn't waver too much.

NYCSPITZ, Whatever happened to the pictures? Anyhoots. Savage crusade. Channeled your headless horseman past life with intuitive sword movement. Ravenous pillaging of a third world village. Flash in the pan type of verse. Kindled, could've piled 20 more logs onto the piece to smolder it and smoke out your cavern of creativity.

I am going against the consensus and awarding the W to Dragon for a more accurate depiction of the topic

06-17-2016, 03:10 AM	#8
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	Shout out to Adonis for stepping down and allowing nyc into these playoffs after Adonis put together his most innovative season thus far. Big of him. Dope battle. Asylum, cool verse. Mini saga. Great line about how the picture flew off the helmet and hit you in the cheek. Stand out line. Not quite clear what is actually unfolding? I'm assuming it's some sort of mob hit? Kinda like sleeping with the fishes? So what happened? You whacked him with the K bar? Good job staying current in your thinking process throughout the piece. Didn't waver too much. NYCSPITZ, Whatever happened to the pictures? Anyhoots. Savage crusade. Channeled your headless horseman past life with intuitive sword movement. Ravenous pillaging of a third world village. Flash in the pan type of verse. Kindled, could've piled 20 more logs onto the piece to smolder it and smoke out your cavern of creativity. I am going against the consensus and awarding the W to Dragon for a more accurate depiction of the topic __________________ *VETWORK* Last edited by Frank; 06-17-2016 at 03:14 AM.