This was smooth from the start to finish
Like you could say this at an actual open mic
The imagery was popping out here & there
My favorite section right below here
synodic, synoptic darkness of the lunar year.
bring light. i'm a luminary.
pinch to double-check i'm still human here,
show me a pauper about whom the affluent care.
we are sick, but no influenza.
just proposed influencers.
^^^nicely worded and structure right there
You always bring something fun to the table
It's interesting to see where your works lead to
Keep it up
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