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Old 08-20-2022, 04:27 PM   #8
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Dave:
Playoffs supposed to be elite, I’m surprised this shook clown has lasted
Even his best quips read like vet trips - every put down is tragic
^ nice connection here man. Good opener

Get took out with the magic; my circle have him crying in despair
Deathly hallows 2: when we reach for Draco’s Wand flying through the air
^ Harry Potter clips have been done to death on Wand but I feel like this was a cool enough one to make it fresh with the dracos piece, not a heavy hitter though

With some original content he could go far. It’s an incredible dream
But he’s the Alex Jones of rapping clones - all his texts already been seen
^ had to Google but this was nice.

Writing a verse gives me a thirst - hit 7-11 then back to disgracing these neeks
This tasteless geek only came out with a Big Gulp when he saw who he was facing this week
^ okay for me here

Wand:
Beat User but copied his flair.. u two make an adorable pair
Got lucky taking his scalp.. all u ever wanted was a lock of his hair
^ I get it and it was cool for what it was but wasn’t crazy by any means

& ya final odds - 1 in 20 million..? but we still fuckin’ get our thrills in
That ozzy heavyweight squeezed the life outta u worse than a hug from Rebel Wilson
^ believe this is referring to Dom beating him, thought the execution was a little off but i do like the rebel Wilson hug aspect of it

So lose that false confidence or u bound to fuck it up, please..
u been put back in ya place more times than an OCD sufferer’s keys
^ this was cool

If u act cagey & shifty that heavy round’s penetrating u swiftly
Chappelle show alternate ending.. there’s no way Dave walks away from this .50
^ thought this was your best line. Maybe even LOTB

This was a little closer than I expected and Wand’s last four were pretty decent but I felt like he stumbled coming out of the gates. Dave had nothing insane but his swagger and consistency carried him here and he took care of business

V/Dave
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