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Old 05-09-2019, 05:30 PM   #9
Sharp
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Original sin was an okay idea with less than stellar execution
Not a fan of most partial name flips. Burn Sina was crazy basic
The setup on screwball is worded terribly, but the punch is good
I get the extended pool scheme and like that you're going for something, but nine in your pocket wasn't much of a punch. Okay wp, swaggy, but lacking sting
Definition of sin is an okay idea but this verse was almost all sin flips already


Aight gawd I love the setup but the punch is a little awkward
Setup was mad awkward and punch was mad basic, appreciate that you mentioned cred (I know this is around that battle cred won) but there's not much of a connection/punch in a reference
The rhyme really lame... Whore twice/bored twice... But after that death by 1000 cuts meltdown Im cool with this bar
I outright don't get the engine all go thing
That closer is my lotb after the verse that was 60% sin flips

I legit have sin with the closer being lotb. DMS got lazy with this one and sinacog thought his concepts out

For real

V/Sinacog
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